By Donna Cangelosi![]() I recently attended a Disney and Pixar short films festival featuring two Pixar shorts Feast (2014), showing the culinary adventures of a Boston Terrier and Piper (2016), a baby sandpiper's quest to overcome her fear of the ocean. Both character-driven movies, like all Pixar shorts, serve as excellent reminders of good storytelling, demonstrate perfect story arcs, and have instructive qualities for picture book writers. Get to the point...and quick! In the opening scenes, Pixar shorts introduce charming characters facing big challenges. In Feast, a small Boston Terrier, Winston, searches the streets for something to eat. In Piper, the baby sandpaper approaches the ocean to find food for the first time. Both are simple introductions with big impact. They pull viewers in and have them rooting for the main character right from the start. Director of Piper, Alan Barillaro said, "You're trying to tell a story visually, as quickly as possible, something that's easy for the audience to get but also humorous and character-based." The Takeaway: Use opening lines that introduce the character, identify the problem and pull the reader in. Create endearing characters
Pixar is known for its adorable characters. In creating them, the animators rely on facial expressions, body language, and fine details to show emotions. For instance, the pacing of Winston's movements, tilting of his head and body positions portray his satisfaction with various foods. The use of personified facial expressions gives the audience a glimpse into Piper's internal experience of shock and fear when she is drenched by a huge wave. Her quick retreat, ruffled feathers, and quivering elicit empathy and a strong emotional tug. The Takeaway: Use strong verbs and to show your character's expressions, body language and emotions. String together strong plots with satisfying endings Pixar animators rely on movement to tell the story. One scene quickly follows the next. Without dialogue, the audience must infer what's going on. This means that every scene must drive the story forward. There are no unnecessary details or detours--just a clear story format where the main character is faced with challenges that must be overcome to reach a goal. The end result...a beautiful story with a satisfying ending. And Pixar never fails to deliver heart-warming films, which make the audience walk away feeling touched, inspired, and looking forward to the next masterpiece! The Takeaway: Don't be afraid to cut characters or scenes that don't drive your story. Try watching more Pixar shorts with fresh eyes--as a writer on a quest to learn more about storytelling!
14 Comments
6/19/2018 01:27:36 am
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7/11/2018 01:29:18 am
My son is always delighted with such cartoons, because apart from the fact that they are very beautiful and funny, they teach goodness and compassion.
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3/8/2019 01:46:22 am
Pixar also releases a lot of good movies like Inside out. Pixar animators are all impressive. I have seen trailers before with an advocacy to take good care of the animals, most especially when it is their pets. It touches the viewers hearts and it caters not only in one country, but the whole world. Aside from it gives message about taking good care of the animals, it attracts more viewers of Pixar movies which become a way to advertise their product.
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12/2/2018 06:35:47 pm
This program was especially made for the children. That is the reason why I would love to see our parents sending their children to programs like this and just let them enjoy! Many films were shown there, and I am just so happy that we have a festival like this dedicated for kids. Aside from the movies shown there, a lot of children activities were held that will test their creativity and willingness to learn. They was filled with so many great things I want to be there soon too!
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12/30/2018 12:58:54 am
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1/8/2019 04:19:37 pm
Pixar never fails me in their movies. One of my favorite Pixar movie is Coco. It was just a recent movie, but it really has a great impact on me. This movie made me so emotional. The first time I had cried there is when the friend of his grandfather was being forgotten in the living world. It was such an emotional part, I cannot handle my tears. The essence of the movie is really happening in the real life. Many people forget the happy moments we have shared with the people who died.
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4/9/2020 02:12:08 am
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5/18/2020 02:43:50 am
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3/11/2021 09:51:53 pm
Pixar shorts is a very popular for its films because, his films are superb.
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3/11/2021 09:55:40 pm
I read the article and it reminds my childhood, I also watched pixar shorts films in my childhood. They makes movies for kids which is very interesting and good.
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6/21/2021 02:22:36 am
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